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You smile.
You laugh.
And for awhile,
it lasts.
Then something's said,
or something's done.
Then it's clear,
your mind has won.
You walk away,
begin to cry.
We stand around,
and wonder why.
My temper's short,
my patience is thin.
I try so hard,
but never win.
I'm done caring.
I'm done crying.
I've done everything,
but you're not trying.
When you hit rock bottom,
you'll have a choice.
Wallow in pity,
or use your voice.
Talk to someone,
maybe a friend.
Someone like me,
who's here 'till the end.
You laugh.
And for awhile,
it lasts.
Then something's said,
or something's done.
Then it's clear,
your mind has won.
You walk away,
begin to cry.
We stand around,
and wonder why.
My temper's short,
my patience is thin.
I try so hard,
but never win.
I'm done caring.
I'm done crying.
I've done everything,
but you're not trying.
When you hit rock bottom,
you'll have a choice.
Wallow in pity,
or use your voice.
Talk to someone,
maybe a friend.
Someone like me,
who's here 'till the end.
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It's just a vent.....ok...i'm just done with BS for right now.....I can't take anymore, I have my own problems to deal with
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heh can relate to this, great poem btw,kinda shows how venting tends to get the best out of us when it comes to writing with this one ;D